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I remember when we were kids.
Everything was so different then.
We never cared what anyone said.
We played the games together.
And that’s when everything was happier.
No one you cared for was dead.
Everything went by as it should.
I hated being shown up by you.
And you didn’t care if I was there…
Or did you care? I guess it doesn’t matter.
How did it turn out this way?
How did we grow so far apart?

I remember when we got older.
We were on a team together.
Haha, we hated working as a team.
We were rivals, yet best friends.
I still don’t get why you saved me.
I guess we started getting along.
I still think of you as a brother.
And I know you think the same way too.
We were twelve, and we were hot headed.
Or was that just me?  I can’t remember.
How did it turn so dark?
How did we grow so far apart?

I remember not that long ago.
I still want you to come back.
Even if you hate my guts.
I could never hate you.
You were my first friend.
And my only best friend.
You were the only one.
Only one that understood me.
You didn’t have to leave.
Or did you? You never bothered to say.
How come you never voiced your feelings?
How did we grow so far apart?

How could you abandon you friends?
Are we still friends?
Why did it happen so quickly?
Why did you try to kill me?
How come you never tried to understand?
Why did you have to be so stupid?
Why did you never ask for my help?
Did you think I would say no?
How could you become like that?
Like the thing that you want to destroy?
How could you do that to the ones you cared for?
How did we grow so far apart?

Answer me, why do you never answer.
Should I just give up on you?
Is this friendship over?
I’ve never admitted defeat before.
I don’t want to now, I really don’t.
Please, listen for once, and think!
Listen to what I have to say!
I want to help you, because you are my friend.
Are we friends now, or enemies?
You know the answer, don’t you Sasuke?
Why do you have to abandon your friends?
How did we grow so far apart?

How?
©2007-2009 ~Honotori
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Author's Comments

This I just made, it is in Naruto's point of view. He is (obviously) talking to Sasuke, and asking him "Hey, what went wrong?" Well, this is pretty long... but I actually enjoyed it. I had an original intent but I kinda strayed. Well, christianpirate94 said in her last journal that she hoped that I would put more deviants up so... here it is Donna-sama!

Enjoy, comment, critique.

~The Far Apart Talented Tina

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:icondeath-by-fangirl:
ooooooo it sounds almost like a song! what do you think Sasuke?
Sasuke: mustkillbrother mustkillbrother mustkillbrother....huh, oh it's *reads* HOLY CRAP, IT DESCRIBES MINE AND ITACHI'S RELATIONSHIP!!!!!!!!
Me: ^^; yeaaaaah, thanks Sasuke *mutters* lunatic...
Sasuke: I HEARD THAT!!!!!
Me: i think Sasuke is high right now so i'll just *hits Sasuke with shoe* leave now :nijaeat: *steals cereal and runs*

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BOOM, BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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so long and thanks for all the fish
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If you cried (like a baby) when Zack died, copy this into your sig.
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^^; actually sasuke it's yours and naruto's relationship, he ish sad...

naruto: :depressed: *sniff* my best friend left me... sasuke... your mean to me!!! just like everyone else!!!! :tears:

me: aww, poor naruto you need a hug *goes to give hug*

hinata: *appears from no where and hugs him* *looks at me and mouths "he's mine!")

me: ok...

naruto: :cry:

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If I'm right than I know I'm right so you don't have to tell me I'm right. Because I'm right. -Me

Had you kept silent you would have passed for a wise man. -Romanian Proverb
:iconhonotori:
but thank you, i think it sounds like a song too!

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If I'm right than I know I'm right so you don't have to tell me I'm right. Because I'm right. -Me

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hahahaha! it was great! i got to teh second line and thought, "sounds Naruto-ish" Hey, to get ya to work, all i gotta do ish leave fer a week!

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protect your nakama!
....waffles :)
:iconhonotori:
:tears: Don't leave again! It is lonely...

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If I'm right than I know I'm right so you don't have to tell me I'm right. Because I'm right. -Me

Had you kept silent you would have passed for a wise man. -Romanian Proverb
:iconchristianpirate94:
oh, how sad! >whimper< now i feel bad....

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protect your nakama!
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hmm yes, it describes that oo. and Hinata, NARUTO IS MINE!!!! but you can have him if you want ^_^

Hinata: *holds up buzooka* i THOUGHT that's what you said....

Me: i'll be going now *runs away*

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BOOM, BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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so long and thanks for all the fish
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If you cried (like a baby) when Zack died, copy this into your sig.
:iconhonotori:
yes...

Hinata: *turns to me with bazooka* so, you were going to do something with MY naruto-kun?

Me: Nope, nothing, nadda, i was just going to warm up the mood then hand him over to you so that you could have a pleasent dinner with a walk on the beach in moonlight then he would take you home and he would kiss you goodnight, and you would love each other till the very end of time! *hugs self* aww, yes that is what I was going to do... ^_^

Hinata: Oh... *puts down buzooka* ok, well, i'll do that myself.

Me: ^_^ ok

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If I'm right than I know I'm right so you don't have to tell me I'm right. Because I'm right. -Me

Had you kept silent you would have passed for a wise man. -Romanian Proverb

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